In today's entry, pay close attention to how apostrophes are used. Are they used correctly? Go to this website for a reminder of the proper way to use apostrophes to show ownership or possession.
Edit the passage below for grammar, usage, spelling and readability. Post your edited version as a response to this blog entry. Remember, you might need to correct something other than the apostrophes.
John's mother was tired. She had danced all night at the witch'es ball and her feet hurt. She wanted to call her friend Mrs. Hearnes, but she had heard Mrs. Hearnes' phone was disconnected. As she settled in for a long day of resting, she feared boredom would come calling because boredom was one caller who was never late no matter what the cause no matter what the hour no matter what the day. So instead of giving in to boredom, she turned on Johns's television and waited for "Mr. Burns's Daily Report" to begin.
WELCOME TO THE REVISION WORKSHOP!
On this blog, you will hone your revising and editing skills, so that you may be a better editor by the time you begin drafting your research paper. Each day I will post a blog entry for you to try your hand at revising, editing or summarizing. It may be a shirt entry containing a variety of errors -- spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc. -- that I will ask you to correct. I may ask you to focus on a single type of punctuation, but be aware: the passage will probably have other errors/problems, too! I may ask you to revise an overly wordy passage or make a passage read more clearly. And finally, I may ask you to summarize, in your own words, an article or other piece of writing. The summaries are to prepare you for summarizing your research in your research paper.
Good luck and have fun!
On this blog, you will hone your revising and editing skills, so that you may be a better editor by the time you begin drafting your research paper. Each day I will post a blog entry for you to try your hand at revising, editing or summarizing. It may be a shirt entry containing a variety of errors -- spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc. -- that I will ask you to correct. I may ask you to focus on a single type of punctuation, but be aware: the passage will probably have other errors/problems, too! I may ask you to revise an overly wordy passage or make a passage read more clearly. And finally, I may ask you to summarize, in your own words, an article or other piece of writing. The summaries are to prepare you for summarizing your research in your research paper.
Good luck and have fun!
Saturday, July 16, 2011
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